Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Here's what I did with Jorgay Bush's 2 Lines from West Texas

 

I accidentally took a sip off a spittoon
Copenhagen slime slid up my tongue, I puked
It was like watching a Looney Cartoon

Religio and Espiritu duked it out on the moon
They punched, they throttled as I watched on the telly-ube
I accidentally took a sip off a spittoon

The spit from the cup tasted like eating a rotten prune
I glowed green like Wiley Coyote getting nuked
It was like watching a Looney Cartoon

On the moon, the holy war raged on, it wasn’t a boon
The guides they gave the blind never looked
I accidentally took a sip off a spittoon

I don’t know why I did it, I must’ve been a loon
The cup they gave glowed when caged and zooed
I accidentally took a sip off a spittoon
It was like watching a Looney Cartoon


Jorgay Bush submitted to me on 7/24 via the 2 Lines form. "I accidentally took a sip off a spittoon. It was like watching a Looney Cartoon." Jorgay requested potted meat and thus I cobbled them into a villanelle. You can do this too and submit me a few lines or 6 Words.

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