Thursday, July 7, 2011

"2 Lines" Submitted by Dick Hunter from Capitol Hill requesting "Pantoum"

 
I just caught myself again
Talking old man speech
“Young man, you dropped your spam.”
“It’s dribbling down your hand.”

Talking old man speech
I asked for the senior discount at Mickey Dee’s
“It’s dribbling down your hand.”
“Your sauce gramps; are you blind?”

I ask for the senior discount at Mickey Dee’s
The kid shouted out my order in Alaskanee
“Your sauce gramps; are you blind?”
 “What’s this shit you’re serving me?”

The kid shouted out my order in Alaskanee
It was the Palin special.
“What’s this shit you’re serving me?”
 “Sonny,” I said annoyed

“It was the Palin special.”
“Young man, you dropped your spam.”
“Sonny,” I said annoyed
I just caught myself again


The 2 lines: I caught myself again talking old man speech; young man your spam, it dribbled down your hand were submitted by Dick Hunter from Capitol Hill on 7/5/2011 1:28 AM requesting a pantoum. Keep 'em rolling and keep clicking in. Thanks! 

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