Tuesday, April 26, 2011
National Poetry Month Disasterpiece
8:00 PM - 10:21 PM December 30th, 1999. Here is what I was thinking the day before the Y2K doomsday that failed to occur:
People are the unoriginal sin
they lack the courage or imagination to be and do something new
while staking a claim of difference
they fail miserably
Individualism
is just another -ism
a categorical way of defining a mythic idea
shrouded behind veils of mystery
meaning an
individuated
autonomously not
undifferentiated
mono-polic person
An individual is taught by the same mediums of instruction
perpetuated by whichever culture they are born into
in other words
SHEEP
exhibiting the same vegetable intelligence a sprig of parsley demonstrates
monkey see, monkey do
Simon says
See my genitalia
I pierced it with a barbell
I am more individual than you
A quarter million herd together the next day
at piercing shops
hoping to achieve
Simon's same undifferentiated individuality
Like autonomous grains of sand resting upon a beach to be sat upon in the sun
individuated by form alone
each grain is shaped a little different from its neighbor
yet each grain is made from the same
pulverized mineral, element, rock, or glass
'Tis the same with snow
save for its shape or form
ice, liquid, or gas
water is water
people are people
accept it, it is true
Gender being the major difference of course
although
there may be two distinct classification for individuals
sheep or freak
social or antisocial
free or locked away in a cage
which would you rather be?
A free to follow Simon keep paces with the Jone's monkey-do sheep
or a violent anti-social criminal locked away in a concrete box for life?
What is wrong anyway with being the same as your neighbor
At least to admit it you're honest
perhaps this is the only way to be a true
I N D I V I D U A L
This is an example of what not to do in a poem. Tell an idea rather than show one.
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This must be the worst poem I've ever written.
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