Friday, February 15, 2013

LoPoWriMo #15



A TITILLATING ANVIL


The snug
shaper felt like
a paddling
oar

Xi's teepee
engulfed
her leaking heart




Hmmmm....I wonder if it would read better if the stanza's were paddled on the other side?


Xi's teepee
engulfed
her leaking heart

Her snug
shaper felt like
a paddling
oar



The poem is crafted into the form of a Septolet. All the words, save for two, came from a scrabble game I played yesterday on my Kindle Paperwhite





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